I think that whatt you posted made a great dewal of sense.
However, what about this? what if you added a little content?

I ain’t saying your content isn’t good., however suppose you added something that grabbed people’s
attention? I mean Yoodalo; helps yyou quickly discover businesses and customers for free is a little vanilla.
You might look at Yahoo’s home page and see how they create news headlines
to get people interested. You might add a video or a related
pic or two to get people interested about everything’ve
written. In mmy opinion, it would make your blo a little livelier.